Some people say that money can make life easier and more comfortable. But others say that having a great amount of wealth can bring some problems.
What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of a having a lot of money?
Determining how money influences our lives has evolved as a controversial topic. This essay will discuss both the benefits and challenges of have a wealthy account.
First and foremost, there is consensus that money lays the foundation of a comfortable life. Indeed, possessing a high and stable income facilitate people take into account many items, making their life more joyful, healthy and memorable. For example, while a middle-class family is busy making a living to ensure a decent life, an upper-class one can go further for an expensive trip, a splendid racing car or an advance healthcare service. In other words, it is not exaggerated to claim that a great amount of wealth is a tool for a high level of both physical and mental betterment.
On the other hand, an excessive load of money also leads to many problems. In particular, prosperity, which usually acts as the result of a long or even painful accumulation, is often misunderstood as a reflection of inequality by a number of pessimists, leading to dissatisfaction and envy. As a consequence, the rich are more likely to be the target of abhorrent conspiracies as well as family conflicts. Another drawback is when the desire of getting wealthy is taken into extreme; a person is lured to commit various crimes. Last but not least, instant wealth also can be detrimental, especially when people are not equipped with sufficient skills and knowledge. Young inheritors, for instance, may be unable to cope with an abundant asset and tend to misuse money to indulge themselves in several nasty needs.
To sum up, personal wealth, with all its merit and demerits, can be deemed as a double-edged sword that may facilitate or harm our lives. Thus, it is suggested that while pursuing wealth to increase their living standard, people should be fully aware of all the pitfalls and unhappiness that are associated with money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of both physical and mental betterment. On the other hand, an excessive load of ...
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...ppiness that are associated with money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in particular, as well as, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02857142857 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94333825967 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5115230477 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189422456875 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597202603325 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337158842794 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10370375458 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256975077884 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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