SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT MUSIC IS A GOOD WAY TO BRING PEOPLE FROM DIFFERENT CULTURES AND AGES TOGETHER.
TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE GIVE YOUR OPINION
Listening music is not only a mode of entertainment but also therapeutics for many.Some people consider it as a better way to bring people together irrespective of their culture and age. I partially agree with this perspective as variety of music made to entertain different group of listeners.
Certainly, music is the entertaining mode as it touches our soul, which reduces our stress and stimulates our intangible emotions. This is why, it has addictive and irresistable effects on us, which result from activation of happy neurotransmitters in our brain. Obviously, the music which comes in specific tone and frequency has its particular impact on us hence, its selection is stereotype. Obviously, the variety derived from different taste and choices therefore, one type of music can bring people together with similar taste. However, only few masterpieces of music had managed to make their popularity in all demography.
The acceptance of music is based on its composition since, different beats make different types. In fact, there are many options available in the market to choose from even though not all of them are widely accepted. In many cultures, for instance, Hip-hop music is banned due to its vigorously high frequency music which consider as the stimulant for young adults. Similarly, age matters as the preference of the music changes with the age. Foe example, elderly people like listening music of all types even though they admire and enjoy the one with low frequency and classical touch in it.
Overall, it is clear that music has profound impact on the way we feel as it expresses our emotions even though its selection affected by the age, and cultural preferences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19565217391 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88412169473 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1632638355 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215095253892 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814074886355 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612851295819 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146823135196 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563140572385 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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