Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music is very popular these days. Many people sit together to listen music. It is often argued by some people that music is advantageous to bring people together. I agree with this view that music helps in building relationship among people of different backgrounds.
On the one hand, Music is taking new heights day by day. There are many ways in which music is helping to bring people together. Firstly, music gives peace to the mind. Many family members sit together to listen music on various occasion. This will create better bonding and help in overcoming stress. For example, on every festival my family members site together to listen to music to enjoy the festival. Secondly, there are plenty of different music available. People like to listen music of different culture. For example, one of my friends is south Indian but he likes to listen Punjabi music. This way music brings different culture close also. Moreover, music is common for all the age groups which is a good way to bring people together
On the other hand, there are some people who think the music is not a way to bring people of different cultures and ages together. Some people love to listen only native language music. For example, my friend is a Punjabi, he is only fond of Punjabi songs. And he hates when someone play any other language music. So music can sometime be a matter of conflict.
In conclusion, I believe that music is good way to connect people around the world and different age groups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: heights'; height's
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...unjabi songs. And he hates when someone play any other language music. So music can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76833976834 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3414879571 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494208494208 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2539392059 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.75 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.95 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424361800926 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148467460718 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124114453621 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306482366108 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475120050334 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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