Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Many people claimed that music is an excellent choice to join people from various communities and ages. I agree with the statement because music has a magical hand to gather people irrespective of language, tone and lyrics.
On the one hand, music makes people mind to be calm and quiet and make it a distraction from hustle and bustle of daily living. Many musical theme lead listeners in a dream world and the melody make them to relax and relieve from life pressure. For instance, music experts around the world collaborate with medicine to extend the vast advantageous of music in treatment purpose. Moreover, song from other national languages often influence people across the world to some extend. For example, shakeera a famous overseas singer have fans from other countries only because of her song during the world football match. Many of them are not aware about the lyrics though, that music is always present in everyone's tongue. Along with that listening music does not require an interpreter even it would be an unknown language.
On the other hand, music is not only the way to gather people together. There are methods like, cultural programme, universal fashion competitions, and so on. Such entertainment also makes people to feel good and sense of unity to some extent. Such as, arts and films with subtitles often make people to join together to watch and explore comments and opinions. Furthermore, the reduction of linguistic diversity through proper education also enhance people thoughts and uniqueness and may lead to bringing everyone into a group.
To conclude, although there is many opportunities and artistic variations to explore other communities and join together, music is situated at a higher level than others due to the exaggerated qualities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind being'.
Suggestion: mind being
...s. On the one hand, music makes people mind to be calm and quiet and make it a distractio...
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Line 2, column 472, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...fluence people across the world to some extend. For example, shakeera a famous oversea...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...versal fashion competitions, and so on. Such entertainment also makes people to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are many opportunities'?
Suggestion: there are many opportunities
... into a group. To conclude, although there is many opportunities and artistic variations to explore othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13745704467 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62977995477 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4300272381 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258415838739 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910087702225 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576154125081 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155240208736 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858233966549 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.