It is undoubtedly that music is a soul of life which plays a crucial role mostly in everyone's life.There are certain masses who believe that it is a good effective way for connecting people from different cultures and even ages. I partially agree with the given statement which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs that how music makes good bonding in relationship among individuals
On the one hand music has a great influence on every aspect of life which is likely to broaden Peoples horizons to welcome various cultures all over the world, because music can reduce this culture gap and be a good method to help individuals to have a better corporations with other people. Moreover, no matter what language masses speak or understand because people appreciate the melody and depth of music which touches their heart.For an instance, recently live concerts were held simultaneously in the UK and USA which dedicated to the raise of the funds and it got great experience and success. Consequently, the people around the world who watched them, got international public awareness.
On the other hand, regardless of age we can all enjoy a memorable moment rhythm or a beautiful singing voice. In addition, apart from music there is no other form of entertainment which may bring families together in a divine way. Moreover, music is not only useful for overcoming from their stress but also it motivates people to take every effort of life for becoming a great person another reason is, music can be a great asset to make friends with strangers on different occasions.
In conclusion, I personally believe that music is unique in its capacity to create shared experience between masses irrespective of culture and age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03135888502 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78308018837 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602787456446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.065198909 49.4020404114 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.5 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.875 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.125 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265381807851 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109892809772 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496899573635 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15705963738 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036268117765 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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