Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
It is true that music plays an indispensable part of our lives ever since the dawn of human history and many people believe that music also has the power to connect individuals regardless of their cultures and ages. I personally completely agree with this point of view.
It is said without exaggeration that music has been considered as an international language which could be used to communicate among the majority of people from different cultures around the world. In other words, an individual who does not speak the same language of the composer or performer of the playing music could be able to comprehend the stories delivered through its melody and rhythm. For instance, “The cup of life”, an official song of world cup in the 1990s, is so globally popular that brings the majority of football fans together whenever it is playing. This is because it could raise football spirit among the listeners and admirers of this type of sport would share their excitement with other people regardless of their origins or the languages they are speaking.
Similarly, in my opinion, there is no age limit when it comes to music. Whether it is modern pop, rock, or traditional, as long as they share the same tastes of music, people from different age groups could easily join altogether to enjoy their favorite melodies. There have been many videos gone viral on social networks showing several elderly and their children singing alone or dancing to their favorite songs together. Despite the generation gap which may deteriorate the social contact between the young and the elderly in the contemporary world, music could break the invisible walls between them and bring them closer.
In conclusion, no one can deny the important role that music plays in our life. Not only music is instrumental for recreational purposes, it can also be seen as a mean to bring people together regardless of their ages and cultures.
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, similarly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01242236025 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63386995477 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9483889153 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224966603494 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849470670973 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489235591616 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140479708541 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191099988682 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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