It is no exeggaration to assume that music is one of the most impeccable methods to sustain the relationship of populace from diverse cultural identities and ages around the world. Thoughout the history of music, it has been considered as the sound of recreation and alleviation. As far as I am concerned, I am wholeheartedly in agreement with the fact that music strengthens and gather people with the similar passion together by virtue of these following catalysts.
To begin with, from my perspectives, notwithstanding the language amd culture barriers, music touch people’s hearts by its flawless rhythm and melody. To be specific, it is an incontrovertible fact that music enthusiasts indulge themselves in the harmony of a composition before comprehending its lyrics. Music is the global language, that demonstrate why residents around the world, regardless the variety of cultural identities, enjoy the same kind music. To illustrate, Kpop is one of the most prevalent phenomenons in the world with the reputation and success of prominent groups BTS or BP, their songs is composed in Korean, but not only Korean people can perceive them, every natives can feel their rhythms.
Moreover, music has the power of unite and connect people of distinct generations and ages together. Regardless of ages, the depth of compositions can drive us to numerous emotions such as sympathy, sorrow or resonation, which can occur at any age. People can annihilate the generation gaps to interpret the messages delivered in the songs. To be specific, according to statistics, when listening to our nation’s anthem, the whole population have the feeling of moving and boost their patriotism to a great new extent. Besides, music is a wonderful method to assist people from dissimilar generations to conceive more about trends among youngers as well as the elderly in modern soceity.
The above discussion favours a conclusion that music is an indispensable part of human’s lives, attached to this, musical compositions also eradicates generation holes and cultural boudaries to connect people to each other .
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: cindycornelia98
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oudaries to connect people to each other .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33033033033 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10535048275 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.9774835554 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.538461538 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239647085379 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833103625421 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480596476907 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147522938314 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139145014309 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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