Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
In this century many platform form mobile phone are given to listeners for make them listen to music more efficiently, we can listen anywhere and everywhere. I also believe that music and help people feel a same mood and know their culture from different type of music.
A lot of people listen a variety of songs that produced from different countries, but in this situation not all of them know the meaning behind the songs because languages are not the main reason to listen the music. Listeneners can feel the situatuin about the music just form the melody that created. This situatuion happen when many korean pop song are plays in many countries. Many of them are waiting from their artist launch a new song and album.
On the other hand, the usage of internet nowdays rapidly growth. All of the countries are connected with the internet. This thing make many listeners come from various place. They only need to open youtube or just another application to listen the music. A new information about music also can easily access from social media like instagram. So, they can know the changes of world this days.
The main reason of this essay is people can easily access variety of music from their mobile phone and they do need to know the main reason of the songs to listen it. I agree that music can help many people to know another culture and listen together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20924487688 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487603305785 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.541871985 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9285714286 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166688509189 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663487653694 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661687231149 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123493508 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503680881118 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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