Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion?
Music sometimes speaks louder than words. Some people claim it is a bridge to connect people from different backgrounds and age groups. In my personal opinion, I completely agree with this statement. This essay will highlight music as a universal language and a form of expression.
A very prominent claim to deliberate is that music strengthens bonds between different cultures. The rationale behind is that the listener could feel sympathy or sadness through melodies without the need to understand its language, and they, therefore, might want to enhance understanding of their favorite song composers hometown. The Times recently recorded that the prince of pop music, Justin Bieber, has contributed a significant part in Canada tourism as his fans are willing to pay to travel to their idol’s hometown.
The rationale provided above can be further argument be declaring that that music could bring people from different generations together. This born by the fact that the most popular songs tend to share common concerns about life or with meaningful lyrics that inspired people, and thus listeners from different age groups could enjoy the same song. As mirrored by a case of my friend and her mother, both of them are interested in Kenya’s music because he frequently sings beautiful songs to motivate women.
Subsequently weighing all of the aforementioned, this can be safely stated that music does such a good job in connecting people, interfering with their cultural origins and ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7838697088 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5006551064 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.636363636 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255809530756 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093771079866 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736350747048 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153746064776 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964790497008 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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