It is often said that it had better be seen movies in cinemas rather than watching movies at home while others strongly believe that thanks to our new gadgets, this chance is given to us to enjoy the last released films without any suffering. In this article I attempt to elaborate advantages and disadvantages of these both statements and finally I revealed my own opinion.
In our contemporary epoch, thanks to the advancement of the cinema industry, our current generation could readily profit from a huge amount of thrilling movies. Additionally we can opt our preferred movie to see in the cinema hall or in the cozy ambiance of our homes.
The proponents of cinema wholeheartedly believe that the only appropriate place for watching movies is the cinema due to a lot of rational reasons behind that. First of all they express because of modern instruments and equipment of cinema, we can easily enjoy our moments by watching high-quality movies. Beside this, by going to the cinema, we can hang out with our close friends and simultaneously discuss the various aspects of films like the role playing of actors and actresses or music and so on.
On the other hand, the second group believes that it is not worth our while to invest our precious time to go to the cinema while this chance is given to us to benefit from numerous devices. They think in the light of up-to-date technologies, we could enjoy exciting movies in our homes effortlessly. They think due to our hectic lifestyle and our multiple duties, it is not easy at all to arrange our time and find an appropriate moment to dedicate to go there, concurrently it is obvious that we should consider some extra hours due to our todays bumper-to-bumper traffic.
Needless to say that in our home we could pause the film for different reasons or repeat some parts or whole parts of a movie to watch several times. In the other way by watching a movie at home it is more comfortable to adjust a specific time.
Apart from all reasons, we should not forget the effect of financial reasons to choose our favorite path to watch.
To recapitulate, both ways have their particular privileges and drawbacks. However, for going to the cinema it is really hard to find an appropriate time to go there while by watching movies at home we could enjoy the film without wasting our valuable time. I undoubtedly prefer to watch films at home away from any annoying issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...from a huge amount of thrilling movies. Additionally we can opt our preferred movie to see i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, really, second, so, while, apart from, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75413711584 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71011294015 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505910165485 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0613294427 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.6875 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4375 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283091180347 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966229346574 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059001847434 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140805950532 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461326260348 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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