The given maps illustrate Lynnfield town and its alterations during a period of time from 1936 to 2007.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the main features of town were completely changed and it converted to a more residential area than the past by expencing natural places.
In 1936, the region was contained with more and untouched natural features like more green trees and a long river which was surrounded with a vast pristine land, while after about 47 years this area became a crowded residential area.
According to these maps, it is easily revealed that the southeast of Lynnfield was dedicated to Farmland and Government office in 1936 but over the time, a Golf course was held on the former place of farmland and the building of Government office was changed to a Museum.
By passing several decades, the cycle path which was located in the southwest was changed to a Road for circulation of vehicles.
Unfortunately the amount of north western trees dramatically decreased amongst this mentioned period of time.
The bank, library and post office in the central part of this city remained at their initial locations. However,the little commercials in 1936 disappeared and a huge supermarket settled in their former places.
A Travel agent was built at the ancient place of the Flower shop and a large shopping centre was added to the central part of this city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...field town and its alterations during a period of time from 1936 to 2007. Looking from an o...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ically decreased amongst this mentioned period of time. The bank, library and post office i...
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Line 11, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ined at their initial locations. However,the little commercials in 1936 disappeared ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03389830508 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68598616697 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584745762712 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3379372092 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 3.83414634146 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0938007446002 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425049672872 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587307953107 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463387159871 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060667633648 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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