Some people argue that there is no advantage to conduct the Olympic games in present generation.I completely disagree with this statement which means Olympic games do have a role to play in this era because it helps to reduce the political tension between two or more countries and host country can earn many foreign currencies which can surely uplift their economic status.
First of all,Organizing International games is the best way to deduct the political misunderstanding between neighboring countries.Misunderstanding can be solved in a very good manner.Olympic games helps to regenerate the peace in many rival nations.These games helps to maintain good relationship among different nations.For example, The article published in "The New work Times 'in 2017 have clearly informed that the relation between India and Pakistan have reached a new level.Thus, Olympic games helps to maintain and increase the relation status of two or more countries simultaneously.
Moreover, Host of the Olympic games can increase their economic level.Many supporters from the different part of the world come to support their country in Olympic games.So, the host countries can take the maximum profit from this . The tourism area of the host country can easily be published to the world in no time.Tourist can visit that place again and again for the recreation.for example, one of the supporter of Portugal have visited more then 3 times the host country of 2016 Olympic games.The economic status of Brazil reached zenith in no time after hosting the Olympics.So, this will help the host countries to increase their economic status.
To sum up,Olympic games play a vital role to uplift the economic status of the host country and to maintain peace around the world.Furthermore it will help to keep the good political relation between neighboring countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3698630137 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20342031447 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479452054795 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.99768114 49.4020404114 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 313.6 106.682146367 294% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.4 20.7667163134 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.2 7.06120827912 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145332205382 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962280302115 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580969678203 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111290681294 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545739183175 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 13.0946893788 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.15 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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