Sports have always been popular, and liked by most of the people across the globe. Olympic is a platform for many sportsmen and athletes to showcase their performance to the world. I totally disagree to the statement that Olympics don’t have any weightage in the current century. Many countries are eagerly waiting for their turn to host such highly honored game event. It not only helps in improving political relationship among the countries, but also in the increase of the economy in the hosting country.
Firstly, many countries participate in this popular event. They forget their rivalries, encourage each other and spread message of peace to the whole world. This help in reducing the political tension within the neighboring countries. Moreover, it is an occasion when other countries get a chance to know more and appreciate the tradition and culture of the hosting country. Hence, Olympic Games play a vital role in improving the relationship and continue to do so in future.
Secondly, by hosting the Olympic Games, the host country gets benefited financially in many ways. Many travelers from foreign countries fly to this country to watch the big event. Industries like, Airlines, Hotel Industry, and Tourism Industry get lot of business and get benefited by this event. Furthermore, such events create lot of job opportunities for the host country people that help in reducing the unemployment in the country. Subsequently, with so much inward of cash flow, countries economy gets a boost, and improves countries financial condition.
Finally,to conclude, Olympic Games are very important due to many reasons, it still carries a lot of importance in the world of games, and will continue to carry this status symbol in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... the relationship and continue to do so in future. Secondly, by hosting the Olympic Ga...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...ountries financial condition. Finally,to conclude, Olympic Games are very import...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21908127208 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75704435237 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554770318021 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9599358573 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115649891346 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443972165142 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735805986463 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076798502049 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533482202231 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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