some people say that online study is the most effective and convenient way to learn. others believe that online study will never be effective as learning at school in person. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Education sets the way of success for everyone. Presently, some proportion of masses assert that online study is lucrative as it is easy way to learn everything. On the other side, school is the most powerful weapon for learning. Here, I would like to account both the view points with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support the former view. First and foremost, people can accumulate distinct types of ideas and views by online study. To illustrate, ample of trainers confer different methods of learning on internet where people can compare the ideas and choose effective one according to need. Apart from it, online study can not only enhance the thinking power but also amuse people. For example, unique methods of study such as quiz competition, online testing and many more create curiosity in people.Hence, they never feel bore or depicts their interest towards learning. On the other side, others have conflicting views.
To begin with, initially, unlike online study, schooling study is more practical. To be specific, in school people can take part in numerous types of competition where they can not only boost their confidence but also gain knowledge about a specific topic. Moreover, in school people can reduce their mistakes by doing practical work on study because they can easily get weakness points through their teachers. Thus, learning in school is significant for every individual.
To recapitulate, undeniably, learning in school can never be neglected. However, still I believe that in this high tech era online study play magnificent role in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, apart from, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20930232558 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61121818871 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643410852713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9861089671 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337573466069 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104044403974 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506546886665 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208805550439 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351934173882 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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