Some individuals are of the opinion that traveling and working in overseas countries are the only purposes of learning a foreign language, while others argue there are more reasons besides that. I personally believe that there are numerous reasons that people have a motivation of learning new languages.
On the one hand, it is true that one of the reasons to study foreign languages is to migrate the different countries or to have a better job overseas. Being bilingual or multilingual is the main advantage to give them a variety of opportunities to be recruited by international companies or to work overseas. In this day and age, there is an increasing demand for learning a foreign language from a variety of labor markets. Besides that, they want to travel to overseas countries to explore new regions and cultures, so they need to study new languages. For instance, if people travel to other countries, they need to know the basic conversations to communicate with native speakers in daily life. It also helps them to broaden their knowledge and gain new interesting experiences and reduce the language barriers.
On the other hand, traveling or working is not the only reason why some people learn foreign languages. There are many people who study a foreign language simply because they are curious about the culture and customs of a country using that language. For instance, if they study new languages, they can read a book or a comic or watch films easily and quickly. Furthermore, some languages inspire them because of the difference in grammar and writing systems, such as Chinese, Japanese and Korean attract many learners due to unique writing characters.
In conclusion, I endorse that everyone should invest time and effort to learn foreign languages due to significant factors which languages have brought.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11627906977 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7926903185 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531561461794 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6963288582 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368795300356 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14194378919 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12503095856 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245355204565 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478622666018 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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