it is argued that some folks believe that purpose of learning a foreign language is travel or work in oversea. While another people deem that a lot of cause to learn others countries language. However both aspects are explained in the ensuing paragraphs.
First-of-all,the most general view is the amount of people learning other languages is more and more increase. This mean that they can only use them when they go abroad to visit or carry out their occupation. A example of this is it is unnecessary for the majority of people who not intend to travel or work in other countries to study foreign languages because without using in reality can make their study pointless. Beside this,it is also true that international language can only support for work or travel, if they was less working in environment where using foreign language, it could be difficult for them to use their second language in another place.
On the filip side,many reasons had to learn outside National language,the foremost view is studying foreign languages can bring promising benefits for leaners. This is because there are obvious effect of that such as reducing the chances of dementia, keeping our brains healthy for longer, experiencing other cultures or accessing international information. Another cause is people was good at international languages, they could open the door to better employment opportunities. The globalization have brought many investments for countries as well as employments for local people, thus, inhabitants need foster capacity of language to with foreign partners.
To conclude,the discussion it can be finally say that although foreign languages take pride of place, it brings manifold for people, individuals should appreciate the crucial of them and have a huge investment in term of time and money in order to achieve best results
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24915824916 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88445108192 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2999912235 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.916666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374025601449 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130899364993 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811065482497 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22177215077 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424780873478 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.