Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is undeniable that more people has trend learning other languages for some different purpose such as travelling or working. In my opinion, I gree with the idea. Nevertheless, I think that learning new language is necessary, not only for these purposes.
Nowadays, learning a foreign language for the purpose of working in other countries seems to become more and more polular. Adults in need money are trying to pursue their happiness far away from home. In addition, if they can learn good a foreign language, they will easily find a company with a high salary for them. For example, when you can get IELTS 8.5 scored, you will earn a lot of money by become an English teacher or work in a big hotel because English is a general language in the world so English is a importan language to learning. Besides, If people learn a new language for travelling purpose, they could communicate with foreigner when they come there. It is not easily to finding who able to speak the same language with you there. So, learning a foreign language is necessary to you travelling to any countries in the world.
However, to my mind, a new language should not be learned for travelling and working purposes in a foreign country. A foreign language can help the learner broaden their mind. This mean that the new language will allow us to understand more about the world itself such as about new cultures, customs, peoples and languages of any countries on the global. In addition, there are some reasons to people learn a new language such as they want to talk with foreigner to learning new somethings, or only they like watching America films without sub.
In conclusion, I believe that learning a different language should be not only for satisfying our needs like money, buts also that is a their interesting such as learning new knowledge.
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| 2020-12-07 | hiva farahani | 67 | view |
| 2020-12-07 | hiva farahani | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ith a high salary for them. For example, when you can get IELTS 8.5 scored, you w...
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Line 2, column 513, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ral language in the world so English is a importan language to learning. Besides,...
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Line 2, column 698, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a able'.
Suggestion: who is a able
...come there. It is not easily to finding who able to speak the same language with you the...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'their'?
Suggestion: a; their
...our needs like money, buts also that is a their interesting such as learning new knowle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77358490566 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59587718874 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4774600081 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340696290718 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135985095229 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892443270889 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225884505236 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451006730805 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.