Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is undeniable that economic and technology are becoming development. Some people think that people today can buy the same items like some famous brands from any part of the world and this make the countries are a lot of more similar than before. In my opinion, there are many advatages and disadvantages from this similar.
There are many reasons why it has some advantages. Firstly, people can buy any international products from their homw country that can make them save time. For example, a people in Japan like a car brand in the US, they must to come there and buy it for their interesting. However, today when people can buy these brands cars without travel to there. Secondly, the amount of purchase from many countries to increase that lead to competitive environment in the market and companies must to introduce new inventions, new brands, new products to attract more people. This make people have more many choices of products with higher quality as good price. Finally, people can follow new some things like fashion trend, new custom or new culture from any countries. This also contributes to the declining of difference among nations and they have many experience when they want to live or travel to any countries in the world.
In contrast, there are some disadvantages for this similar. Firstly, people can forget their traditional products like clothes, toys, medicine or food... Besides, this can affect negatively to the economic of this country. For example, people concentrates buy international brands without care of traditional items, this lead to some factory where produce that products will close in the future and some people will become unemployments. Moreover. the number of visitors will be decrease when theycome anywhere, they can feel bored when look at the same products.
In conclusion, similar way to life in different countries have made life easy and comfortable than in the past, despite some drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... Japan like a car brand in the US, they must to come there and buy it for their interes...
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Line 2, column 481, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...environment in the market and companies must to introduce new inventions, new brands, n...
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Line 2, column 841, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
... difference among nations and they have many experience when they want to live or travel to any...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... some people will become unemployments. Moreover. the number of visitors will be decreas...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...le will become unemployments. Moreover. the number of visitors will be decrease whe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08411214953 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66605882961 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501557632399 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.259780263 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266168730525 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892831201076 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652998526009 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170729961729 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08322300864 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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