Communicate between two different nation speakers has always been a serious problem since human era started. Therefore, studying foreign language is a priority, even though there are some thoughts on if it is only useful for traveling or working abroad.
Language is not only a connecting tool for human, but it is also a cultural exchange gate. People learning foreign language can explore a complete different world, either through Internet or novels and films. Also, they can widen their social connection by practice speaking with the native speakers and express their thoughts on many life aspects. Besides, it would be easier for people to go on an excursion if they excel a lingo. In some cases, people might get lost or have trouble, knowing the native tongue is a great bonus in solving things.
Furthermore, language has a great impact in occupation. People knowing multi languages should catch a chance to improve their living standards by working overseas. This scenario is no longer stranger to developing countries, when a large amount of their citizens tends to apply for a new position in the developed one, due to the good exchange rates. Moreover, things go easier for people who acquire several languages to set up a business in an international environment. Once the language barriers remove, trade agreements and opportunities will come together.
In short, while mastering more than one language gives a positive effect for either traveling or offering a well-paid job, I have a fully trust on the advantage of commanding other tongues.
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- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both these views and give your o 78
- The chart shows the percentage of drugs taken by girls and boys in a school in New Zealand Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('fully') instead an adjective, or a noun ('trust') instead of another adjective.
...ing or offering a well-paid job, I have a fully trust on the advantage of commanding other to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in short, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15748031496 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73643289268 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665354330709 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0392403465 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205789329003 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691473683227 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066491125975 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11795311601 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340548553393 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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