The capability of proficiently utilizing a foreign language requires a devotion of decades in learning, which is not an effortless last for every one. Regarding to the reasons of acquiring a second language, some people claim the ultimate reason is for visiting or working in a foreign country; whereas, others believe that other reasons induce the desire to learn a foreign language. This essay will evaluate these view and share the writer's opinion.
Traveling and working aboard surely necessitate the ability to speak the language; therefore, people have to learn the native language. If a traveler cannot speak the native language, he will encounter immense difficulty in the journey. Additionally, the potency to speak fluent native is the basic requirement for an employment in a foreign country. For instance, employees from non-English speaking countries must demonstrate the ability for basic communication in English in Australia.
However, others believe interest in foreign books and films arouse the desire to learn the foreign language. People tend to read book in original language as it was written rather than to read in translated version; thus, they learn the foreign language in order to enjoy the original taste of the author. The same sentiment arouse with foreign movies. For example, teengers who fascinated in Japanese animation also enthusiastic in learning Japanese.
To recapitulate, people learn a foreign on the basis of either outer demand or inner interest. Personally, I think the reason why people learn a second language is that people want to explore the exortic world and learning the native language is the key to the new world. With the capability to use the foreign language, people enjoy the novelty of the wonderland by traveling, working or reading.
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- IELTS 10 Test 1 Writing Task 1 - Academic 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
... will evaluate these view and share the writers opinion. Traveling and working aboar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32631578947 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79973617013 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540350877193 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2500396532 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444459542037 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144082716023 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909762918624 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271734745753 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868053225742 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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