Some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. Do you agree or disagree ?
Some people thought that protecting the surrounding is the national governors’s responsibility.While it may be true in the case of some societies, i would argue that protecting the earth is the responsibility of both central officials and individuals
It is evident that there are some environmental issues are too big for individuals to solve,only the government can.To exemplify, some serious problems such as storm, tornado,and tsunamis,because of their enormous destructive power,the ordinary people can not solve them.To solve them, only the special equipments and the use of technological devices that only the governments can have sufficient funds and resources to invest it.Moreover,to protect the earth,it is advisable that the national governors should enact strict laws.If a company exploits trees more than the permitted threshold, it will be fined
On the one hand,it is true that individuals should take the responsibility for environmental protection too. First and foremost,ordinary people should reduce the contaminant by using public transport which reduces the carbon dioxide, instead of using their private cars.Secondly, individuals can also buy friendly environmental products such as solar energy to protect the environment.
To sum up, it is argue that protecting the earth is the government’s responsibility.Although it is national governor’s responsibility, ordinary people should take the responsibility to protect our habitat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94312796209 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.79704566212 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597156398104 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 344.975683523 49.4020404114 698% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 418.0 106.682146367 392% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.3333333333 20.7667163134 339% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.3333333333 7.06120827912 430% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206685493763 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143788203627 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644908365879 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148211869956 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532048721752 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.7 13.0946893788 318% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -16.49 50.2224549098 -33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.0 11.3001002004 292% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.36 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.9 8.58950901804 139% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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