As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibility. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that businesses should not only make money themselves but they also have responsibility for society. Personally, I completely agree with this idea and will discuss several compelling reasons in this essay.
On the one hand, companies earning benefits are the most important things to keep up our social stability. Firstly, businesses in Vietnam could contribute a huge amount of money to the government by paying more taxes. Therefore, the government can have more firm finance so that they improve state projects such as local schools, hospitals,...Secondly, the more money businesses can make, the more job opportunities they provide to employees as their demand for expanding company scale. As a result, the employees are given more choices of finding their suitable work.
On the other hand, besides earning money from consumers, enterprises should also focus on showing their social responsibility. By making products for benefits, companies have caused a lot of environmental problems such as deforestation or industrial waste because of their mass production. For instance, companies which produce tissues or papers have a lot of demand for woods. Thus, these companies lead to actions for cutting down the trees. Moreover, huge enterprises should act as representatives and call for actions involving social duty. For example, a lot of businesses could extract their revenue to charity or community projects, which also enhance their image with target consumers.
In conclusion, although making money is considered to be the most priority to any business, I believe that it should be encouraged for companies to take social responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53307392996 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15254349454 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603112840467 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8726219949 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7692307692 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222015130484 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787179558819 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717470858084 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145418951993 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523249905381 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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