It is widely acknowledged that environmental problems have been still a topic of interest for many decades. For this reason, many people dispute whether the charge for preserving the nature is taken by the authorities or ordinary citizens. This essay will clarify both viewpoints prior to drawing a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, it is understandable that some people think of maintaining biodiversity as the governments' affair is due to their power to bring in laws and policies. As far as I am concerned, authorities are capable of controlling the output of production and consumption by giving new rules in productivity of companies where harmful-to-environment products are created. Furthermore, the affordability for green technology is a subsequent strength of governments. Eco-friendly equipment is considered too high-priced for the masses in public; the nation's coffers completely meet this need. For instance, financial sources such as taxpayes' money can pave the way for innovative technology.
On the other hand, it is also justifiable that ordinary citizens have to take on the maintenance of the surroundings in light of their eco-friendly lifestyle. It is obvious that the majority of new-behaviour supporter is really crucial to conservation of the environment. For instance, the widespread transformation commuting by private vehicles into public transports is a reasonable testament to this reasoning. Moreover, doing environment-protecting companies and boycotting habitat-deteriorating ones can foster them to change their bussiness way.
To sum up, environmental maintaining is a collossal responsiblity that needs to be cooperated by the governments and the public to succeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, still, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74803149606 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.83233288919 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61811023622 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7926965458 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145385066574 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449163131056 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235354573953 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804605756032 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211378609849 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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