It is undeniable that tourism holds a pivotal role in the national economy. However, this development can bring about both positive and negative outcomes, which will be explored in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, the tourism industry is undoubtedly beneficial to some extent. To commence, a boost to the nationwide life standards seems to originate from tourism. Numerous infrastructures need to be set up to meet the unceasing influx of tourists, which creates a host of employment opportunities for people. Consequently, people are likely to obtain a higher quality of life thanks to increasing revenues and institutions also form a more sufficient labor force. Moreover, the tourism industry is worthwhile in preserving local traditions and spreading civilizations. To give a prime example, Loyal Hue Court music which immerses foreigners in classical melodies is organized to remind the locals of a former thriving Vietnamese dynasty and bring foreigners a more comprehensive outlook on the country.
On the other hand, it is inevitable that it is conducive to environmental deterioration in terms of disastrous catastrophes and serious pollution. Excessive buildings serving human purposes cut down a significant number of trees, leading to the forests' depletion. The implication of this is that immeasurable species of flora and fauna are on the verge of extinction. China clearly exemplifies how adversely polluted traveling sites here are in light of overmuch transportation for sightseeing. In addition, the rate of exotic animals and plants around the world is going down by dint of constructing limitlessly according to recent research.
All in all, while it is true that the tourism industry can enhance the sustained welfare life and tradition's maintenance, it also detrimentally affects the environment.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 63
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay 89
- Some people say that protecting the environment is the governments responsibility Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it Discuss both views and give your opinion 81
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue this is leading to negative consequences Discuss both views and give your opinion 95
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'forests'' or 'forest's'?
Suggestion: forests'; forest's
...ificant number of trees, leading to the forests depletion. The implication of this is t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56071428571 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30033818613 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3391869031 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.214285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894774411573 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280324676234 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278824722647 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538736433286 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398392111806 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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