Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people hold the opinion that young students are not being taught pertaining to the health through schooling system. I, however, believe that health plays most significant role in entire life but, it is the responsibility of concern department or government to spread widely knowledge about health nationwide.
To commence with, there is no denying that health has become a primary problem now as compare to past around the globe that actually is not beneficial especially for youths. Badly, it has been seen that schools are not enough focusing to teach about health to their students owing to several issues for instance, shortage of time, heavy course outline, non-administrative control and many others. Furthermore, some people raises the question that if, schools management did not add the subject of health in their course outline still, than they need to add for the sake of future generation.
On the other hand, many people are concerned that in order to stream line the situation of health government need to look on eye on this matter rather than blaming on school. Because, several schools retaliated concerning health guidance is to be controlled by the government due to depletion of time and other curriculum activities. Last but not the least, one possible solution is to provide health education with the help of government employees and institutions wherein they may run the campaign to visit schools twice in a month that eventually will be worthwhile. Along with, it will be more understandable relatively others to learn something from professional people.
To sum up, my inclination supports the statement that government is responsible to cater about people's health as well as provide better environment according to health. Moreover, government must be rule about health and check and balance must done from government institutions.
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Suggestion: have done; do
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...must done from government institutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30976430976 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88938330162 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.2210329046 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.363636364 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193924445201 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796314168764 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534176389903 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127136496751 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325615601248 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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