Some people say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have differing opinions on the value of sports in society. Some people regard sports solely as a recreational activity, while others argue that sports play an important role in society. From my perspective,sports would be an essential part of lives with significant positive influences.
Many individuals consider sports to be a method to spend leisure time with friends and family. It is believed that the importance of sports today is exaggerated, and that sports should only be treated as lighthearted fun among friends. In the real world, there are other occupations such as doctors, engineers, and lawyers that are more valuable. As a result, the attention that sports and athletes receive should be diverted to these other professions that truly benefit society. Furthermore, they do not consider any sports to be worthy of being pursued as a profession because they see it as nothing more than a recreational activity.
However, more and more people are recognizing the importance of sports in society. It is undeniable that exercising sports at a young age helps to instill a sense of competition and work ethic. Team sports, in particular, aid in the development of teamwork and cooperation among teammates, which is a valuable skill that will benefit an individual in the long run. Furthermore, sports serve to improve a community's overall health and fitness. For example, because of the country's emphasis on sports, proud sporting nations such as New Zealand have a healthy and fit population. In addition, sports serve as a means of uniting the masses in a country and instilling patriotism in the populace. During a world tournament, such as the FIFA World Cup, people of all ethnicities and races come together to celebrate a win. Watching and participating in sports can also support you to relieve stress and improve your mental health. These positive effects of sports on society attest to the importance of sports in society, despite the fact that some people continue to dismiss their importance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... with significant positive influences. Many individuals consider sports to be a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17325227964 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96190899702 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559270516717 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7992695025 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.117647059 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263315179601 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867499654838 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716476370356 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188803316023 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465933676308 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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