Some people spend their lives working and have little interest in their leisure and hobbies. Others spend their time on leisure and hobbies.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A number of people work as it is the most important thing in their lives and have few interest in their leisure and hobbies, while others regard it vice versa.
The difference between work and interests can be proven by the outcome we will earn. The earnings for work are commonly known for wages, bonus, and promotional career. It is argued that those earnings are the key to success in order to have a decent life and future. On the other hand, spending time for hobbies and leisure would give us pleasure as a sign of stress relief and healthy mental health. The difference between two personas - workaholic or hobbies enthusiast - are evident as it is more likely to be found of people with a happy mind and calm personality enthusiastsd in their interests.
It is believed that work is a place prone from pressure and stress. Although, work is an essential life duty to get a proper living, however, it is not the most important thing in live. Enjoying life, be happy, and not being under pressure are the foremost important element in life though working based on our passion is a different condition. Hobbies and leisure time engaged us to enjoy moments in life and do not be to stressed or pressured.
To conclude, work is not the most important thing in life and it is not entirely right to depend as if our lives are chosen by work. The simple things in life, no matter how small, can bring such joy for us if we enjoy them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun interest seems to be countable; consider using: 'few interests'.
Suggestion: few interests
...important thing in their lives and have few interest in their leisure and hobbies, while oth...
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Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'vices'?
Suggestion: vices
...ure and hobbies, while others regard it vice versa. The difference between work a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54615384615 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42221811766 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546153846154 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3816651433 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234398480414 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841349607019 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107043508576 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172669256287 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145251593406 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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