Some people tend to buy products or get services instantly, without waiting.
Why is it happening? Is this a positive or a negative development
It is burgeoning that people are not interested to wait for anything or they need everything all of a sudden without delay. This is because of their busy schedule or work-life balance, however, it would be a negative impact on them.
Ever-growing technology and industrial revolutions make people's life would be stressful and timeless. Many people are thriving to balance their family, work, and personal life as a result they could not wait for anything for a long time. For instance, working women need to manage their household chores and employment at the same level so they are trying to purchase their everyday needs in a handful of time. Similarly, many cooking materials are available in the market like instant breakfast and cuisines and that may help people to minimize their household work to some extent.
Nevertheless, buying ready-made products may have health consequences and extra costs. Initially, People who make life easier with such products may in turn bring more consequences in their lifetime. For instance, many canned and processed food items may lead to cholesterol, diabetes and other life style disorders. Secondly, those who are relying more on instant services might have low-quality materials and assistance to some extent. Speed-up the works may affect the minute mistakes and cheap installations which would negatively affect the quality and longevity of the materials. For example, motor and vehicle services done within a short period may adversely affect the performance.
To sum up, everybody are busy with either work or self-personal matters and thereby getting support and services within a short period of time. However, dealing instant products and services may lead to detrimental impacts of oneself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ing support and services within a short period of time. However, dealing instant products and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35507246377 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76442389794 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0897196111 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182115280215 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648832860581 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039863328174 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116056070651 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023301085946 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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