As more and more students enter universities, academic qualifications are becoming devalued. To get ahead in many professions, more than one degree is now required and in future it is likely that people will take a number of degree courses before even starting work. This is an undesirable situation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that academic qualification is inevitable to get an esteemed position in many professions. Some students are degraded from companies as per the single degree and which would lead to fruitless effect on society and forthcoming future to find a job with lack of multiple degree. However, in this essay disagree with the statement because, having a double degree makes up knowledge and problem solving skills for the leaders.
Knowledge and academic qualification is the corner stone of any prominent professions. Students or employees with double degree often get predominant chance to obtain lead role in terms of linguistic and sustainable academic proficiency. As per the qualified degree students could achieve enough ideas and skills to solve the problem arise inside and outside company or from other sectors. Furthermore, students with multiple degree would analyse the issues and targeting the proper decisions for enhancement of company. Owing to the fact that, many professions are looking for employees with couple of degree than single degree holders for the development of industry. For example, leading Malaysian company searching for manager for city region to get ride of mistakes happened previous year by the effect of poor academic qualified person.
It is often argued that, multiple degree makes age over to get a good job and become financial crisis to many. While, people those who have more than one degree would be suitable for higher rank position in professions or companies. Such as, master degree would obtain as per the limited age duration if there were any other lagging of university papers. Moreover, many banks and student support plan offered to student loans and facilities to achieve goals. For instance, PhD program conduct by university of Hyderabad explain that have had a master degree or multiple degree in same subjects ascertain doctoral by the support of bank loan with no interest.
To sum up, ascertain enough knowledge and skills through postgraduate or multiple degree often produce indispensable effect on individual and society. Thereby, it is literally fruitless argue to minimize the target to single degree in turn of higher academic qualification makes up the value to the peak in efficiently and effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3379501385 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76547539218 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534626038781 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.083630951 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.4375 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237045579706 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084668603659 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041008712687 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144489648408 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381557461155 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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