Some people tend to take temporary jobs( they only work for few month of year) for they have time to do other things. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Taking temporary occupations has been tended by certain individuals for the past few years and after working hours they devote extra time to other things. This essay will highlight that adverse consequences of this approach surpass the benefits brought by it.
Two glaring advantages of taking temporary jobs are enumerated following. Firstly, since in the fast paced competitive era, people are willing to receive tons of experience in different fields of work due to unemployment. By doing such jobs, they can enhance their knowledge from a variety of work. Unquestionably, there have formulated ample industries in certain parts of the world, for instance, multi- national companies where employees are capable of recruiting jobs for a short period. Another benefit is that if a worker works temporary jobs, he will get an opportunity to spend a great deal of time with his family. To cite an example, in the present scenario, owing to a hectic schedule, people have forgotten to draw a line between family and a job. So, definitely, in this respect, they can entertain with their parents during their leisure time instead of job.
Despite the above mentioned benefits, the detrimental aspects are quite severe. Indeed, people cannot get job satisfaction unless they glued with merely one job till lifetime. What is more, when people transform their workplace frequently, their interest is already lost. Secondly, by taking temporary jobs, people are not only deficient from pay hikes but also they live in dilemma. The reason is that unsecurity of jobs that can fired at any time.
To compandium, although being a temporary recruiter is worthwhile in order to build profound knowledge regarding various work and spend amount of time with family, its downsides somewhere as a bane for temporary professions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23367697595 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76128759871 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.661526415 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375223401461 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106237538544 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813489363516 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203705556007 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571017471274 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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