Many peiple visit museums, which are representative of cultural and historical facts of a particular country when they travel to new contries. Why do you think people visit museums? Should meuseums and art galleries be free of charge for the public or should there be any entry fee?
Undoubtedly, visiting to exhibitions by all stratas' of society has been accelerated for the past few years. Infact, it is a symbol of traditional and historical aspects of a specific nation during travelling to distinct regions. As per my consideration, individuals visit there to aquire a profound knowldge not only about the country's culture but also the history. I comtemplate that the gallaries should not be free of cost. Both answers will be examined in the upcoming paragraphs.
Two glaring factors behind going to museums are enumerated following. Firstly, since newborns are unable to know about their cultural values unless they visit museums where they can obtain a fruitful information regarding the country's costumes, rights and rituals. To epitome it, a Partition museum in Amritsar which give a deep sense of contentment to visitors and aslo a source of entertainment for public. What is more, when overseas come to any destination, they capable of getting much information about the history of the nation. To elucidate it, they note in their mind that how many battles were in the past, who were the charismatic persons and about the freedom fighter for instance "Sheed Bhagat Singh". So, definitely, in this respect, museums play a lucrative part in the world.
Despite the above mentioned some reasons to visit exhibitions, there is my claim that why museums should be under charges. Although art galleries are the significance for public, there must some affordable charges even if it does not worse free of cost. To explicate it, if there should not any kind of entry fee, everyone would visit there whether the person is willing to know something or not. Perhaps, due to such situation it may lead to disturbance and other sorts of obstacles. Whereas by imposing entry fee, there would just serious people who want to get constructive outcomes. Hence, I have to say it should not be free of cost.
To compendium and reiterate my opinion, people visit museums and art galleries just for getting history and tradition of the nation they should not allow to visit there without entering fees as I have discussed in this essay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, regarding, so, whereas, for instance, kind of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02247191011 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74957332566 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592696629213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1692840525 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374237769367 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967658714229 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647109574819 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215061646826 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294296238138 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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