Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do
unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They
believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society
as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be
beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do
not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.
Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies,
without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare
time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect
their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending
lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we
should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing
sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead
of them when they finish their studies.
At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from
obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it
goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of
people to do something against their will. Doing this can only lead to
resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being
used, and parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their
children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the
best system.
In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others,
but in my opinion we should not make this compulsory.
Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be
beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do
not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.
Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies,
without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare
time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect
their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending
lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we
should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing
sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead
of them when they finish their studies.
At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from
obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it
goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of
people to do something against their will. Doing this can only lead to
resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being
used, and parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their
children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the
best system.
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- Despite the innovations made in agricultural field a number of people in the world still starving and malnutrition This essay will illustrate the key reasons behind of this issue and the solutions to deal with this problem Firstly climate change is one of 56
- Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole Do you agree or disagree Many young people work on 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71365638767 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29158744395 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859030837 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5023187627 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.523371310639 0.244688304435 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197828764004 0.084324248473 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997319833851 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146808184293 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867302121783 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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