Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
The role of young individuals is becoming increasingly recognizable in modern society. Whether these people should be encouraged to take part in voluntary work in their leisure time or not, is a topic of interrest to the public. I completely agree with this viewpoint as it would merit teenagers and their local community as a whole.
Young individuals can be tremendously beneficial from supporting others by accumulation of hands-on skills and expansion of their perceptions about the world. Firstly, by joining in social campaigns, young individuals would acknowledge the procedure of organizing social events and getting involved actual programmes, which implies that they can apply such knowledge to their job when they enter the labor market. Moreover, while interacting with the less advantaged people, who are disabled, old, and sick, young persons would realize that they are more fortunate than others. This not only makes them value their normal life more but gives them a sense of happiness.
In addition to young individuals' merits, the contribution of young people also creates value for their societies. The first gain is that the local society can make use of young persons at free of charge. Even though the inexperienced workers may initially find it difficult to provide their assistance, they will gradually become useful members of voluntary organizations after gaining sufficient experience. If teenagers deny giving their hands for help, it would cost local goverment a certain amount of financial resources to fund such activities. Additionally, after working as volunteers, young enthusiasts would become reliable and qualified individuals, who play an intergral part to the success of their communities and nations.
In sum, interference of the young in social activities would have meaningful impacts on the teenagers themselves as well as their community. I, therefore concur with the view that they should aid their society without requiring salaries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50326797386 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92728017106 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7709244676 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272807629091 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969925416296 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06624809353 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183368854433 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631089503867 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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