In modern days, one of the most controversial issues related to what subject to learn university students. "they should gain knowledge that associated to their interest" think most people while rest of them believe that to bring a prosperity, people who are entering a university only need to choose such subject as science and technology. In this essay, i am going to examine this situation from both point of view. Firstly, I will consider personal aspirations and then secondly a possibility to rapidly increase development of science and technology.
On one side of the argument there are people who claim that the benefits of studying subject made by own decision considerably outweigh its disadvantages. They primary reason for believing this is that trying to gain undesired knowledge abolishes a passion to study. Otherwise, It is also possible that learning to own favorite things may create a happiness. This positive emotion may rise an effort to study. One important illustration of this is nowadays everyyear about 12000 students abandon a university cause of studying their unwilling subject.
On the other hand, If many students studied one subject, competition of that will increase a quality. People often have this opinion because competition is key of development. A particularly good example in here is that researches found that, as last five year in US, quarter of students who enrolled a university chose a marketing of business, competitions of marketing of business dramatic jumped. Similarly, quality of that rapidly increased between last five year than past.
In conclusion, as we have seen, them are uneasy to discuss this topic. On balance, However, I tend to believe that in university, students should choose a subject that will be better in evaluate of future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
...ersity students. 'they should gain a knowledge that associated to their interest'...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... science and technology. In this essay, i am going to examine this situation from...
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Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r believing this is that trying to gain a undesired knowledge abolishes a passion...
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Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'undesired knowledge'.
Suggestion: undesired knowledge
...r believing this is that trying to gain a undesired knowledge abolishes a passion to study. Otherwise...
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Line 2, column 314, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to own'
Suggestion: to own
...wise, It is also possible that learning own favorite things may create a happiness....
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Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ppiness. This positive emotion may rise a effort to study. One important illustra...
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Line 2, column 446, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
.... One important illustration of this is in nowadays everyyear about 12000 students abandon ...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ecause competition is key of development .a particularly good example in here is t...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to market'.
Suggestion: to market
...tudents who enrolled a university chose marketing of business, competition of marketing o...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
..., them are uneasy to discuss this topic.On balance, However, I tend to believe tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27083333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97092391166 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5583585036 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293026345358 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851511698653 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736153950241 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163518663259 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060857803628 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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