Some people think that art is essential subject for children at school while others think it is waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The purpose of art washing the dust of daily life off our souls. Whether the art is a crucial subject for school children or not? In this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and asserations and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side of the argument, there are inhabitants who consider that the benefits of art as an academic subject considerably outweigh its disadvantages. First and foremost reason is that a child is able to explore thier hidden talent in the front of the world. Although , there are plethora of intellectual skills which develps child skills. Furthermore, it is also possible to say that art acts as medium for the pupils to express their emotions directly. One good illustration of this is that in 2014 , the survey was conducted by the cambridge university which observed that 80% students were interested in the art instead of other subjects.
On the flip side, there are antogonists to this assertions who believe that learning art is wastage of time for children. They bolster their veiw point by claiming that it is an extra burden on children which is cobsider by their parents. Moreover, parents beleive that their pupils get easily distracted from acadamic studies by including art in their studies which will decrease there scores also. Additionally , , nowadays there is no job propects foelr students in art ; consequently , they opt for job facilities.
In my opinion, both arguments have their merits. On balance, however , I tend to beleive that parents should encourge their children to choose subjects in which they have more interest or perform well instead of imposing own decisions on the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02150537634 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72204313024 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0431722337 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.071428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181203460575 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685168090337 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685458200433 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110770552131 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200555199157 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.