some people think that the best way to gatherinformation is through newspaper while others believe in other better ways. discuss both views and give your opinion.
While some people argue that the best way to have information is in newspaper, I side with those who said others way like television, hand phone is the best way.
On the one hand, it could be said that several people prefer read news-sheet because they think on paper is more complete and clear that others. In addition when reading newspaper, it is able to build reading habit, can boost word reference as well as is more comfortable for eyes.
On the other hand, it was the old way if society still read newspaper. Currently, technology is evolving. Society prefer use electronic device such as smartphone, or television to search information due to the fact that it is quickly, complete and reliable. Then, it is user-friendly for many people not only for adult but even children can read information on it. Today’s mostly societies spent their time in front of their smart phone or television rather than read news-sheet. On it also many application that are provided and people can download in plays store.
More over many said that using smart phone for get information are able to gibe negative impact for instance the eyes became blurry, disrupting sleep pattern taking into consideration the fact that they spend times not for reading newspaper but just playing games. If comparing to technology, paper takes long time because of the information has to be molded first.
To sum up, as the ages go on, technology has evolved that many people are using new ways of obtaining information by relying on that rather than news-sheet.
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| 2021-12-13 | Tryputra 17 | 61 | view |
| 2021-12-13 | Tryputra 17 | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...more complete and clear that others. In addition when reading newspaper, it is able to b...
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Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun application seems to be countable; consider using: 'many applications'.
Suggestion: many applications
...rather than read news-sheet. On it also many application that are provided and people can downlo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, then, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91984732824 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64414577987 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2757607114 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.416666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150222562087 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581288329938 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942135220603 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10569617132 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116154480871 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.