Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss thus view and give your own opinion.
It is believed by several people that fish or flesh give negative impact to their health. Furthermore, when they did not eat both foods, it gives advantages to whole world. They do not realize, On the contrary consuming fish or meal makes their healthier.
Firstly, if humans lack protein on body, it will danger for their health, however, they do exercise every day. Protein is not produced by humans’ body but it comes from foods which are consumed by them. Moreover, foods like a flesh or fish. Secondly, the negative impacts to body are people are going to lack energy when doing activity. Not only that, but also body is easily diseased. Indeed, consuming meal too much not positive for health; however, it much more danger if people has not consumed it anymore.
Next, the other impact is to economy. In this world, almost all countries did export import especially in food. In addition, mostly food imported was the best meal. As a known that export import could growth economy when countries did it. Then overpopulation is going to animals such as cows or chicken. As a result, human and animals would compete towards dwelling. In this competition, animals are going to lose its habitat however, people have built place for example zoo, yet that is not enough to relocate all animals.
To sum up, energy is important for human. Mostly energy is gotten from food like meal or fish. Then, demanding of meal can boost export import then increasing economic in countries,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mostly food imported was the best meal. As a known that export import could growth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88537549407 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39043854577 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2658580031 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0526315789 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3157894737 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178579194043 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542310518198 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606064430058 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118961645358 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940023715233 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.19 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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