Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university. Other believe that there are other better way to learn about business.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Business is a passion of human that every one has to do for earing a living. Meanwhile, some people argued about the best way to learn the business is to take a university courses, however, opponents think that other elements are also used to learn it. To me, other factors which are really rely on human daily basic, play a significant role to make a successful and effective business.
on the one hand, university courses always base on formulative structures that could be unfair and unreal for the real life. Business that depend on people perspective and daily necessity where college course based business could be unable to provide the needed amenity of individuals. Alleged and theoretical knowledge would probably be beneficial when technology related trade held such as engineering which really depend on formula but to meet a needs of contemporary society, firstly entrepreneur should find out the scarcity of community and which products would be effective and beneficial to fill the lack of it. For example, my father had launched a restaurant a few years ago , but we became unable to provide the needs of developing society. And that is a real example of course based business.
On the other hand, other factors in learning about business such as well quality in goods, products according to public demands and nationality on products can paly a crucial role to make a well running business. If any company can able to provide these facilitated products, they could win the public trust that really help for sustainable continuity in business. It is certain that if public get unfair on products, they will not use it. Willing the trust of public with their actual needs would be effective way to learn and for further development in business. For instance, Mr. Binod Chaudary, who has became able to meet the public requirements that leads him to be a rich person of Nepal.
In conclusion, even though, university based business give the formulative structure, finding out the public real needs and make it as a business will create a massive impact to run a sustainable business
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96590909091 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72706997646 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3626658464 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236179383157 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082591467663 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106655342204 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160705211246 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885834720361 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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