SOME PEOPLE THINK THE BEST WAY TO REDUCE CRIME IS TO GIVE LONGER PRISON SENTENCES. OTHER, HOWEVER, THINK THERE ARE BETTER WAYS TO REDUCE CRIME. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
crimes is one of big problems which people face these days. several individuals believe that with adding longer prison time spending will decrease crime issues. Meanwhile, others have opinion it could be solved with some ways. To what extent, I will discuss both views and elucidate more with my personal perspective.
On the one hand, jail is the best common way to punish bad people in order to make them regreting about what they have done. In the prison, those people will be detained during detention period which has different time depending of crime level what they did. moreover, they will be trained to control their temper and to have some skills that hopes be helpful for their lifes. For instance, reported by BBC News.com, Canada has the best rehabilitation methods in its prison with several facilities such us yoga room, training room, and good sanitation in order that prisoner would become a better person after leaving the jail.
on the other hand, people believe that crime could be reduced because there are some reason why crimes are happen. in addition, average prisoner admited that they did crime due to difficult of getting jobs. for example, according to CNN News in America in 2021, there were almost 1.5 billions of people who lost their job due to covid-19 pandemic because many companies were bankrupt. so the economy should be remained stable in order to preventing people do crime.
in conclusion, longer prison sentences could be better way to make people regreting they fault, but I personally believe that we can avoid crime by solving financial issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34410479582 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8859962601 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.307692308 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263893013008 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977893889824 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060345027759 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170183540855 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317880948498 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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