Some people think cars are better way of transportation around the city. While, other prefer cycling. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remain irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that which transportation is more convenient around the city for travelling; car or cycle? Through this eassy, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through example and assertions and shape up my opinion by end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that nowadays cars are quickest and faster mode of travelling which not only save people's time, also people can cover huge number of miles in short period of time.70% people who go far away from their hometown for work they travel only by car would be the good illustration of this. Apart from all this, in summer season people want to travel in air conditional cars which protect them to crouching heat and it also save their time, money and Labour cost.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that some people promote cycling usage in their day to day life instead of cars and cycling is best source of exercise and also keep their body fit and healthy, in busy lifestyle people do not have time for exercise but cycling is best way keep a person well. Moving further, riding by cycle people can keep environment clean and also can solve pollution problem. Cycle is best way to cover short distance and it is make environment safe and healthy.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that both mode of transportation has their own pros and cons and people need to choose the right vehicle according to their requirement and necessity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
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...tect them to crouching heat and it also save their time, money and Labour cost. C...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
... not have time for exercise but cycling is best way keep a person well. Moving further,...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...also can solve pollution problem. Cycle is best way to cover short distance and it is m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77816901408 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56959035342 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6305136254 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.7 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148485813493 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550473854862 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318461903141 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869358164093 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00448256482604 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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