Some population believe that preserving natural environment is crucial. However, most make no effort to do so. Why do you think this is happening? What are some simple actions that could help the environment ?
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. Nevertheless, the given topic asserts that which type person preserve their natural environment? In this eassy, I will examine the possible reason for this trend and suggest some of the practical policies that individual could implement to crub this problem.
The first step is to understand why this is happening? Broadly speaking, there are some reason for this. The first and foremost is in earlier their life people cut the trees for taking the wood through the plants to make the different types of wooden things which can easier their life. Apart from all this people have to take contracts for killing the animals and when they finish their work then they earn high amount of salary from them. Last but not least, nowadays organization has face place problems to introduce the business that's why they cut the trees to establish the industry on it.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to be to make general public aware of people has to understand the importance of trees which is helpful to reduce the pollution in the environment.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that has led to make this problem worse. While, it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this, this could probably be solved by government should organise the awareness compus which is aware the general public towards to preserve natural environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, apart from, as to, broadly speaking, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98823529412 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60776942252 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8900195374 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175180521874 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687167100449 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455045052652 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107905295009 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030993022693 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.