The diagrams shows the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how is cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes.
The given diagrams reveal the information about the process of cement production and how this cement is used for concrete production.
As we have from the first diagram, the cement production is start with some stuiable equipments. firstly, the limestone and clay are crushed and produced powder. From this, it passed through a mixer. Then, the power is passed via a rotating heater. After that, the heat is supplied constantly and this process creates the raw cement materials. Moving ahead, then it passed through the grinder machine and it produced the cement. Futhermore, the cement is packed and marketed for sell.
Apart from this, the second diagram presents how the concrete is used for housing and other buliding works. first of all, the 15% cement, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% small stones are mixed in concrete mixer machine. Secondly, the machine rotates anti-clock wise direction for mixing the all material together and to create the concrete.
overall, it is evident that all the steps are mandatory for completing this process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...is start with some stuiable equipments. firstly, the limestone and clay are crushed and...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: FOR_SELL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for sale'?
Suggestion: for sale
...more, the cement is packed and marketed for sell. Apart from this, the second diagra...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...d for housing and other buliding works. first of all, the 15% cement, 10% water, 25% ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...ogether and to create the concrete. overall, it is evident that all the steps are m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4395429187 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619883040936 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4432915348 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34913167097 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119283982512 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113883204562 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228044012301 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128518260268 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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