Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some households believe that letting their kids to stay at childcare centers since they have the best services, while other parents think that family treatment is better care for their kids. Personally, Both methods are having unique advantages and this essay will provide suitable reasons with explains and examples.
First of all, It is true that nowadays, many parents spend most of the day working their job to gain salary, which will use to take care of the family. Therefore, they do not have much spare time to play with their kids so to avoid kids getting lonely, these parents will send them into childcare centers since they will have space to play along with friends, and teachers will look after them when parents go to work. Secondly, lots of childcare centers often establish events or long road trips, which helps them increase chances of exploring the outside world effectively. For example, in some childcare centers, they let their kids travel to the rural areas to teach them about nature and animals. This makes children learn new things by practicing and discovering by themself, which improves their knowledge and creatively effectively.
On the other hand, letting children with family members is still a good method. The first positive impact is that the relationship between kids and all members increases significantly because they have time to play with each other and understand their habits and personally clearly. For instance, when kids play along with their grandparents, they will feel less lonely in order to they have too much time and do not know how spend all these precious time. The second advantage is that parents can teach them to do household chores and adjust their manners to right with society, which are very useful for kids to become responsible and mature to the family and outside world in the future.
In conclusion, these two solutions are both effective and I believe we can not just rely on one method only, we must combine them together and this leads children to develop perfectly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en parents go to work. Secondly, lots of childcare centers often establish events...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9853372434 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38189970838 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557184750733 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.809721254 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.666666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4166666667 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263699239555 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103192946163 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723882026979 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166735911644 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924868522284 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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