Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is commonly believed that childcare centers are places providing the best preparation for children in the preschool age, while other parents argue that children should be taken care of by family members. From my perspective, although both views have their own justification, I agree with the former one.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why family members will be the best caretakers for children instead of the nursery. First and foremost, looking after children of preschool age by grandparents helps working parents to reduce the financial burden. For instance, in lieu of sending their kids to kindergarten with a large monthly budget, parents can have similar support from grandparents. In order to do that, they can save up their money to use for bigger plans in the future. Furthermore, with the help of grandparents, their children are controlled and looked after every step to ensure that no daily accidents will occur. Consequently, the children also have the same opportunity to grow up well-rounded.
On the other hand, there is no denying that the nursery plays a vital role in the development of children, especially in the social aspect. To begin with, sending preschool-age kids to kindergarten is the best way to both physical and intellectual growth. To be more detailed, during school time, children can enhance practical skills such as how to eat by themselves and communicate with peers through activities. As a result, they will be independent early and have knowledge about their surroundings. In addition to that, in those centers, health and sleeping time will be ensured. For instance, kids can be provided a healthy and balanced diet with essential nutrients, do exercise, and have medical records for every week. Not only meals but also through stories that teachers told them, their psychological aspect will be developed.
To conclude, two ways have their benefits in both financial and social faces. Personally, I believe that sending children to appropriate childcare centers is necessary for them to have greater all-rounded progress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to work' or 'work'.
Suggestion: to work; work
... of preschool age by grandparents helps working parents to reduce the financial burden....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27245508982 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89959664892 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577844311377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1356653523 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.588235294 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342347009541 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105492672343 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685994198803 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21806230499 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609019195297 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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