A University should accept male and female students equally
Some people argue that universities should accept the number of male and female students equally in all type of subjects. Personally, I completely agree with this discussion and this essay will explain the reasons and suitable examples.
First of all, universities need to sign up both male and female pupils equally since this is a huge opportunity for these universities will create a good atmosphere for students to study, which everyone feels comfortable when they see lots of people who are the same gender at them. For example, A university, which has the percentage between boys and girls are nearly the same with each number, they can communicate more comfortably since they less feel isolated when they can talk with their friends who have the different gender. Secondly, when students learn in schools that teach for only one gender, it might be hard for them to conservation with other gender because they are living in an environment that surrounds them are people also like their gender. Thirdly, equal treatment between boy and girl students in the university will encourage them to learn harder since they do not feel unsatisfied when witnessing different gender is treated better them. As a result, they will focus on learning and this will increase the reputation of the school in order to create such talented people inside their education systems.
In conclusion, it is true that we are living in the era that everyone is equal and Therefore, universities should accept both girls and boys in every subject since this is a great chance for universities to find high-quality students for pursuing their dream subjects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07037037037 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64866609801 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6546319336 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.125 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.75 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.375 7.06120827912 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27174405096 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15291552829 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188447696923 0.0667982634062 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252123692576 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099913003603 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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