Should educational activities be incorporated into the free time of the children? There are some opinions that children's free time should include educational activities, others say it will be a waste of children's time. In my opinion, I would agree that educational activities should be included.
Firstly, educational activities include activities related to spiritual and material development such as arts, sports, cultural exchanges, sightseeing, volunteering, labor, etc. All have good for the kids. For example, cultural exchange stimulates cultural curiosity and understanding between countries. Furthermore, educational activities provide an environment for students to exchange and learn other skills such as communication or teamwork.
Finally, educational activities also orient the children to find their passion. For example, participating in music helps them develop creativity, participate in sports to help their body healthy. Since then also found his forte to continue to promote. When they find their passions, they will help them achieve their goals for the future.
In short, education always makes us develop, does not make you backward, so I think using time for educational activities is not a waste of time. Time is precious, let's do useful things instead of thinking that educational activities are a waste of time. Educational activities that help you be more successful and increase the capacity of each person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, so, then, for example, i think, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7023255814 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09629133171 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613953488372 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9525079164 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5714285714 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403426249644 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142385798634 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132413277419 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232731723641 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125975902536 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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