After high school, a choice that many students have to make is whether to go to college and university or not. The decision that will give people the better opportunity to have a more successful life is go yo to college and university. In most people's opinions, obtaining a university degree is the best way to get success in life. write an essay to an educated reader to give your opnion about this trend.
Nowadays, everyone is following the trend of using a university degree which is the best way to success in life. To a certain extent, I agree that studying for a university degree is not easy. you will take a lot of time, effort, moneys to get it. Furthermore, there are successful people who do not needs university degree. However, I also think that a university degree will bring you real benefit if you know how to take advantage of it.
On the one hand, I would agree that you will have many job opportunities with a university degree. In other words, you will have more opportunities to go on business, study, gain experience, and expand relationships than those who have never experienced the university. For example, employers always ask content people to word for good positions so it is hard for them to choose a young inexperienced person and nothing to prove their qualifications a university degree as proof that you have the necessary knowledge and skills to meet the requirements of the job. Not only will it help you in your job, like getting a good job, having more career advancements opportunities, but it will also benefit your life and help you improve your relationships with colleagues, friends, and family members.
Nevertheless, I also think that a university degree is not a must for success. First, if you hold a university degree to apply for a job without soft skills it is completely useless. Next, the world famous examples do not have a university degree such as US President Abraham Lincoln, owner of Coca Chanel fashion and perfume, Steve Jobs, Mark Zuckerberg, etc. Last, in 2018, job search site Glassdoor published a list of 15 businesses that no longer require qualifications, including big name like Google, Apple, Starbuck, etc. That shows qualifications do not guarantee you success in life.
All things considered, a university degree is the best way to get success in life, in my opinion, more agree than disagree. I think going to college or university is boon for a life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ng for a university degree is not easy. you will take a lot of time, effort, moneys...
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Message: Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
... there are successful people who do not needs university degree. However, I also thin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, i think, such as, you know, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87209302326 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95938228064 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1324371953 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261153573738 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101761410143 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679885371717 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175010656757 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519076390246 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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