Undoubtedly, outdoor activities provide countless benefits to people. Some individuals believe that engagement of outdoor tasks has a significant role to play rather than playing online games. Although physical activities is an effective approach, contribution of video games has various advantages too.
To commence with, participation in outdoor tasks may bring an ample number of benefits to doers. The first and foremost benefit is physical fitness. If people indulge in outdoor games, it is more likely that they feel more energetic and full of stamina through out the day since they put their great efforts in order to complete the tasks. They perform the tasks manually and in this way it enables them to burn their calories which they have in the form of fat. It would not only help them to feel relaxed and rejuvenating but also keeps them fit. Therefore, with the contribution of outdoor activities such as playing football, doing household-chores assists them in terms of health.
Moreover, the intervention of outdoor activities also improves the physical as well as mental well-being of human-beings. Due to the cut-throat competition, people have hectic schedules and because of this reason they often feel distressed and frustrated. In order to overcome these obstacles, they seek assistance of recreational activities. These might counter act as a stress-buster for them. Thus, indulging into such activities may facilitate them to improve mental state. For example, a recent survey conducted by an eminent doctor Rochal Marin at Oxford University stated that recreational activities makes performers mind more smart and increases intelligence level too.
On the contrary, video games are also substantially beneficial for people. All individuals like to play online games regardless of their age. With the help of virtual games, players can enhance their cognitive as well as comprehending abilities. Besides this, it also awakens their decision making and logical skills when they take decisions on virtual situations. Consequently, videos games has also salient features.
To conclude, although playing online games has several merits for individuals, engagement of outdoor games are more fruitful for their physical and mental growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...feel more energetic and full of stamina through out the day since they put their great effo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55202312139 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94873757612 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3298221023 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4761904762 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4761904762 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179561530291 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554113234205 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061166130857 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123152931226 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629521089573 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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