In the present scenario, it is commonly witnessed that majority of the countries are toiling hard to expand the tourism. I am of the opinion that it is a positive development and the relevent reasons will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, the first and foremost reason is to boost up the economy of a nation. Several regions are setting up new tourist destinations such as museums, science centers, hotels for the voyagers. When more and more holidays makers will visit to the places for their excursions, they would spend a lot of money on buying tickets, to explore more about the native places, on accommodation and so on. Therefore, it is more likely that it would certainly increase the economy of the nation.
Another clear reason is to provide attractive tour packages to the visitors to travel to diverse nations. Different vouchers, huge discounts are given to them to exacerbate the tourism. Moreover, employment is another cause behind it. By expanding tourist-places, it can provide job opportunities to international as well as local residents. For example, a recent survey conducted at Oxford University stated that over 50% of the visitors prefer to make journeys to fully developed places because of their exotic areas, continental cuisines.
In my opinion, it is a positive development. Despite having the attractive places in home-countries, individuals tend to go to other countries, which facilitates them to create cordial relations among society. It not only helps them to grasp more valuable information of other places, but also brings global harmony.
To conclude, tourism plays an extremely important role in the development of a country, which gives countless benefits to the nations like employments, financial assistance and many more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01272019238 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632867132867 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0349872489 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266098545704 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655940698904 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565696494078 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123773809145 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407865081297 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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