Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school .other , however , say that cooepration and team working skills are more important.
Discuss bothe sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.
some ones believe that the younger generations should learn how to compete with each other at school, while, other people opine that working together skill is more critical to succes.
some people thinks that youngster who learn to compete against each other often do better in school and I agree. creating a competitive atmosphere, can significantly improve the abilities and talents of children. Children become more active and they try to do their best to be in first place in their teacher’s and parent’s opinion. For example, students often compare their marks so sometimes, a student with a lower mark feels the need to do better than his classmate and work even harder.
On the other hand, some one accept that working together skills are more beneficial for pupils to solve their future social difficulties. It will help them learn how to communicate with different types of friends with their special ethics. Also, children face many different problems and disputes that could only be resolved with the help of others. So team bonding skills will help them in tough situations.
In conclusion, both skills are compulsory in student life. Yet, According to my perspective view children who learn to compete against each other have better chance to succeed in school and later in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07476635514 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52606293929 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602803738318 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8907253905 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7272727273 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23029583582 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862147183407 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520209428848 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139940519741 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366124059902 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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